"Incurable"

[ateolf]

I was down to that point, I thought I would die
Where you know in your heart all hope is a lie
But even the worst disease can have a cure
Let the parasite attach itself elsewhere, let yourself be pure

Things are not always as they seem
I don't care what they say, if they say anything to me
I didn't know I was sick 'til I was already cured
You can recover from this, each feeling is just a word

rest-of-the-band, please let me know what you think...if it's worthy of the song or not or anything else you might have to say...here or in person or whatever...(ppl that are not rest-of-the-band are welcome to say whatever they think about it too, as always...)

Comments

[newness-ends.livejournal.com]

i quite like these lyrics.

[ateolf.livejournal.com]

really? upon rereading it, i was having some trouble w/ awkwardness...then again, as lyrics the rhythm's defined through the music and need not be intrinsic...but i'm still not sure if it needs some smoothing out...i guess the best thing might be to see how it works out when we play the song...

[ex-eskimo-wa61.livejournal.com]

the first line is killer.

[ateolf.livejournal.com]

why thank you...