zthap!

well, my zapping is posted! ooh, and it's here! it's actually not as dumb as the others i'd seen or the other one this month...and they actually say some funny stuff...although obviously a bit is over their heads (and i don't mean that in snobby sort of way, if that's possible...) the thing they say about the characters never kissing is weird because they kiss twice...that paragraphs starts "Our lips met" i mean, that's pretty plain dern english...oh and they also think "traversion" is some obscure word...and they talk about my "vocabulary" a lot...which my vocabulary's terrible, and the fact is not that i used a few "big" words, but their context or whatever...but i don't mean to go on about it...it's amusing, there's also a link to the actual story if you haven't read it yet...but you should read this criticism of my "purple monster of prose"... oh, they also for some reason think i'm trying to explain why he's a stalker or something about stalkers in general...uh, of course there's no explanations of anything...i do enjoy how much they seem to take it as an assault of some sort...anyway...i don't mean to ahem "defend" myself or anything...just read it, it's amusing and junk...