"That Which We Create"

[ateolf]

these are some lyrics that i wrote like two weeks ago or so...

I am alone with this
I wish it meant more to them
The weight rests on my shoulders
I just wish it meant more to them
This means everything to me
This is all that I want
I wish it meant more to them
Because it means everything to me

i'm considering changing it a little...later...maybe...we'll see...if so, i'll let you know 'cuz i know you care so much...

Comments

[theepicproblem.livejournal.com]

they're pretty good...i like it...not much to change really, a little short but they are lyrics so they dont have to be long.

[ateolf.livejournal.com]

i'm just considering minor adjustments, to make it flow better and be less awkward...i have changed the title already..."This Is Ours"...i'm thinking...but i'm still not settled...blah...

Re:

[theepicproblem.livejournal.com]

thats a good title..it just sounds like a title that fits, but i souldnt be saying much cause my titles allways sound gay...that ones good

[ateolf.livejournal.com]

thanks...i prob'ly should have waited 'til i was more certain about these lyrics to post them...i'll prob'ly end up posting them again later...but they fit some current circumstances again so i thought i might as well...